Pretty Crazy

I'm going to do my best in a thorough review so bear with me. :D Rated from 1-5 1) 5 probably my favorite. Love the angle and the snow on ...

Just thought I'd let you know I've been following this story. Keep going with it, okay? :P

That was beautiful. The imagery you portrayed was incredible. I'm curious to see what's happening here. Do write more. ~ Crazy :P

He he. I found it kind of funny. Like how he slept with the watermelon? I liked it. It was very original. I can't figure out what the ending is ...

I must warn you, this may be a harsh review. Keep in mind I'm just saying what I'm thinking. We both want this to be helpful. Enough chatter, on to ...

Wow. This is very, very good. And it's a christian story too. That's great. Let's see if I can find some nitpicks: GOD, what a sweet child, I don't think ...

I like burnt pancakes lol :lol: What's going to happen when they meet up with those guys? Anyone got any ideas on what happens?

Myzac, bat wing girl "Well I'm going," I cracked my knuckles and grinned. "Remember we're not going to hurt them unless we need to," Aron reminded us. "Yeah, yeah, yeah," ...

As he neared Commander Peak, Mask's eyes narrowed into a glare. His leathery wings glided without a sound through the windless air. Beneath him the grey ground, a mixture of ...

LOL! :lol: That was hilarious! Granted, I couldn't understand what was happening in some parts but it was still sooooo funny! I thought the muffin would be a good guy ...

Myzac, bat wing girl I hadn't realized Falcon had been away until she came back with the cookbook. I glared at her as she talked to Peresus. She always had ...

Myzac, bat wing girl I stole a glance at Falcon, wondering what was going through her birdy-head. We were flying side by side. Wind streamed through my hair and I ...

Er. I'm not sure what to do in the story. No one's mentioned Myzac yet. Is she coming in later? Sorry if I'm bothering you guys. :?

I do like this story quite a bit. However. When are you going to get on with it? I want something exciting to happen. Or at least give us readers ...

I rarely read poetry but this is good! It's amazing how you took the same theme for each section and made it progress on like a story. Keep doing poetry. ...